First! xDD

Wao, i love it *-*
the cloths have a perfect color, and i love the way you did the hair,
I like the background too, good job Lune!
bUT Lady Salmakia it's too big in comparation with the bug (sorry, don't remember how you call that bug in english xDD)

And, well, i didn't pictured salmakia like that at all, but you did, so it's just all right ♥

i luv it but did they fly through the lights.......

i agree with reedie, she is too big for the dragonfly. i do love the background

i love the lighting in the back ground, though it makes it a bit confusing to look at. Very intricate dragonfly- u've even done the tracery on the wings! I didn't really think she would wear heavy armour like that, but i luv the armours design and how it blends in to the electric colouring of the dragonfly. As 4 slamakia herself; she looks so fierce and warlike that u can tell instantly she's a formidable fighter!
Overall, it's wonderful!

It's wonderful! I just think you should make Salmakia smaller because the poor dragonfly would be exhausted!

Wow that's just fantastic... She look's very very good. I love the strength in her eyes.. she look wild and fierce.. Only thing that look's a little weird to me is her very short arms? And where are her spurs? But otherwise really really cool, beautyful and powerful..

Perfect! Just like I pictured her.

That's pretty good... just a couple of pointers...
1. She's just a tad too big compared to the dragonfly... poor thing would be exhausted!
2. Where are her spurs?
Other than that, brilliant!

she is way too big in comparison where are the spurr thingys

I know she's way too big. I forgot the spurs because I discovered this site quite some time after reading the book. So I did most of my drawings just from memory. And sometimes you forget little things, like the spurs. So sorry for that,