Yeah, I am sorry about this. I already posted this pic but it had some faults so I decided to try and make it better, (Will's head was origionally too big, Lyra looked anorexic (She might still do!) and Pan and Kirjava looked... well, stranger than they do now! note: I know you can still see the smudged out bit near the Daemons!) So please go easy on me for this one!!

yes, it's much better! don't take offense at that, the other one was inspired, but it's always great to improve! will's left eye is a little large, but their embrace is effective and the daemons are superb, minus the smudges.

I think this picture is VERY good. I don't think Lyra look's anorexic anymore, and Will looks so much better. I like this one !!

i love the way there are holding eachother

This one's WAY better than the last one.
P.S. Lyra didn't look anorexic, she was just to thin. WAY to thin

lyra looks like she saw something gross... but hten again, she may have been picking up on pan's feelings cus, if i'm not mistakes, he and kirjava saw he aggel before returning to will and lyra, and he knew what she (the angel) was going to tell them... just a thought... good job, tho ^_^