its ok but will looks to small and lyra's face looks a litlle weird



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nice drawing, but i wouldn't picture will like that. he's like, snuggling up to her.

It is a good drawing,
but it would be better if Will and Lyra switched places,
Lyra is too big and Will is too small,
and it should be Lyra snuggling up to Will, he is the protector in the relationship.
you are good at drawing though!!

its ok but will is too small and lyras face looks pretty weird.look at reedie belaquas drawings theyre good.not to say this isnt but u jusn need to work on it a bit more.you are a good drawer though

Will does look too small in relation to Lyra. Other than that, there is nothing wrong with this drawing per se. As for Will "snuggling up to Lyra," the general feel of their relationship as shown in TSK and TAS seems to be that they look out for each other. Trust me, if Mrs. Coulter had Will trapped in a drug-induced sleep (or some other unspeakable peril,) Lyra would be there to rescue him!

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