ew, sick

ewww thats rank ...
pssst how old are you ? i thought you were young .. but that drawing ..

are u sure they're not doing something more than kissing? i didn't know two 12 year olds could b so full on.....people normally don't kiss while lying on top of each other unless they're taking it all the way...on all acounts, i don't think that this scene was in the book. Still, i like how u can c Father Gomez in the background, but the drawing is still a bit shallow both in detail and accuracy. Nice try though all the same! Keep drawing!

um, why are they lying on top of eachother?
Sorry, but this really makes me laugh. Other than....that...
it's still a pretty good drawing.....

har har har that's a bit strange

yes, how old r u jillene?

its ok..................................................i suppose.......................

its terrible!!!!!!!!!

it's not that bad, FOTH, if a bit.... er..... odd,
i mean, lyra and will are done okay.

l am afraid I don't like this one at all. I can forgive lack of accuracy over the idea and vision you were trying to create but the vision isn't so clear either. They are 12/13 and they are lying on top of eachother. I am sorry but that is not them at all. It is good that you can see Father Gomez in the background though. try, try,try again eh? Once again FOTH, why don't you just grow up? The only comments you have given have been stupid oneline crap that just disses the whole pic. And I have yet to see you produce anything so I think you should seriously consider not submitting any comments from now on. You have to be careful what you say to people even over the computer. You could hurt someones feelings. Ok I've had my rant. Well done Jilliene.

U ur self sed it was bad. i'm just giving my opinion on how i think this picture looks. If i'm not allowed to do that then wot shall i write?

i'm sorry if i hurt ur feelings Jillene.

actually, i cannot talk at all, because i cannot draw 4 toffe. So thagts one over me jillene.

mabey a little bit more than kissing. but its still pretty good

I don't think it's that unusually for young people to kiss while lying on top of each other.. They don't hav e to do anything else.. this scene is also at the end of book 3.. I would say they would be around 14 .. and when to teenagers are in love .. like will and lyra .. they would kiss and come close to each other .. as many of you also say, the picture aint that accurate, so perhaps it really is innocent ? Think about it..

And by the way .. I like the picture

I think this is a little mature for Lyra and Will. I'm sorry but I would have some respect for it if it wasn't drawn so badly! It's a lil chuncky and doesn't have good shading. Sorry for being harsh but you know what? It's better than I could do.

Sorry. doesnt work for me. they would NOT be laying on top of each other at all. they are 12/13... just... no.

hey, guy with no name if you piad attention to the book you'd find that at the end of book 3 lyra was looking back A FEW WEEKS AGO at when she saved roger, as for the time spent between the retiring room and roger i'd say 2 months, if not barely 3. thats like at the most 4 months between the retiring room, and them kissing. so she'd be 4 months older, and it doesnt say anything about her having a bday anyway. so she would probably still be 12, which brings me to the point that mary c made, LYRA'S STILL A GIRL SHES NOT A GROWN WOMAN. also the narrator mentions that when the witch queen *i forget her name* goes to visit lord asriel, that something happened although she didnt say but all the witches knew, and he says "it didnt even cross either lyra or wills mind" or something along the lines of that anyway. phew im done now

bow chica wowow

It's kinda, well, sick...
How old are you

One more thing, it looks like you took a picture of them standing up and drew the background sideways!

*Agrees with Alexa* Yes their feet are on top of each other?

emm.... sory... thats all ppl at 13 think bout... excpecily in an all boys schl....
anyways... wheres father gomez?

omg.... now i no y i cant see him.... because will and lyra have squashed him...=o

thnk god lyra has no parents... and wills mum has gone round the bend or they would have bin in deeeep crap

Im sorry but...oh God! That wasn't so great!

Again : *shakes head* "Dude, no."

Well, Pullman does talk a lot about teen sexuality.

Elle, I totally couldn't of said it better.

Oops no, misread. Elle, I disagree!

Last comment I swear!
But Connor, I agree with your second comment!

Father Gomez, the killer midget on the horizon!

Jilliene,how old r u because errr...if u're young ....well you 'll know what were all saying when you be older okay.Keep drawing, but in my mind Lyra and Will kissed normaly(not normaly at all cause it's a special kiss)Sitting in some stone or in the floor,but not ....well it's not a normal kiss for teenagers with 13.And Chirsty if you look in the chapter 31 page 408 there's saying Lyra has 13, I think Will do 14.And Chisty of course Lyra doesn't mention her birth if you were in her place you think you remenmber your bith in the middle of all those adventures!
Jilliane Keep drawing , I'll like if u draw Lyra and Will kissing sitting .=)

Slightly out of the picture. I agree with conor on that one, big time!