Oh my goodness, Mary looks absoulutely amazing! I love it.

Wow!! Thats really good. but i dont like when things aren't in proportion(the Heads). I really like Mary and the expression on her face its really good. keep up the good work!

i know mary's head isnt exactly in proportion, but i think i did good on the size of lyra's head...right?

Did you do this on paint or on photoshop? I really like Mary, I didn't picture her with black hair but it suits her great! Nice job!!

Even if both the preportions r really out, Lyra looks really small and stubby (where has her hand gone?) and Mary feet r too small, lovely colouring all the same. Mary's expression is just right me thinks, and i pictured her very much like that, but with a ponytail. Cute ;B

well, wouldnt lyra be shorter than mary? she is only 12-13 yrs old. also, lyra's hand is like that bc i suck at drawing fingers.

aren't fingers like real hard 2 draw? but lyra wouldn't have those preportions even though shes small. just stuff me, i moan 2 much.

Yeah. I like it. maybe mary should be a little less happy, a little more shocked.
and also I always imagined her with her science coat open, showing jeans and a t-sirt, yeah?
but otherwise I love it

I like it. It has the right feel for the scene.

weirdly cool