nice....... i like his deamon too but i somehow imagioned him a little fatter because he is a king and he is wealthy surly...........................

i like the inky, washy feel of the colours! however, to me this looks nothing like King Ogunwe. he's supposed to be a imposing war general, and looks way too thin and scrawny 4 my liking: maybe a bit more muscle/ presense on his account? No off, but .....i dunno.....he doesn't really look like a king....too weak. Needs to be more commanding, rough, toned and powerful. However, i like how he's holding a map and the cheetah is beautifully coloured, if a bit skinny and small. Nice effort: the badges were a thoughtful addition, as the headband, if a too decrative.

u could have dun the eyes better : it looks slightly scary and lifeless the way u've just coloured over them.

meh ok

thanks 4 the comments. ne one noticed his cool diadem?
yeah, his eyes r scary. i wanted them to match his cheetah. oh well...

You could have made him a bit more muscular...