Will looks so serious... great job on his expression.

....beautiful....

He looks too placid. He's supposed to be determined, fierce and sharp, but here he just looks rather doe-eyed.

i like it he looks determined to me!!!!Handsome too. Great please draw some more characters!

Great artwork
but i think he looks too old
hes supposed to be around lyras age
and he looks like hes like 20 or something

Yearh he looks to old, but it's very good.

*hem* Will's ment to be 12. Keep that in mind. Good drawing though. He looks greek

Awesome work, man

Sweet! Love the detail! *applaudes*

eck

you're good with hands....very good

Great artwork but remember- Will is a kid..a very mature minded kid but still...this one looks like a grown-up man=/

WOW, that is fab!! And that's all I can say about it!!! FAB!!!

:-D

ohhhhhhh that white line by the knife...is that him cutting?

Awesome! Will looks just like what i thought he would look like!
well, kind of.
It's so awesome

Will looks too old. No

He looks terrific, stern enough to handle anything, with just the right touch of the exotic about him.

Well, he's old if you're talking about the small part of his life that the book was about but he lives on after the final chapter. I think this is just what he would look like when he's older. It's a great piece of art!